Age of the Fallen

author Mark Olmos
novel, fantasy, spiritual allegory

The characters include:
a group of 8 teenage spiritual warriors led by Aiko
Akira, their teacher
demons and angels demons and angels
many others

In Ephesians 6:10-18 we are told to put on the full armor of God. In Age of the Fallen
the armor of God becomes very real and full of power. The battle being fought is not how we have given thought of what the battle is, but changes the spiritual battle into a new reality. The armor God really comes to life in this allegory. It shows to us the battle our prayers are truly supposed to be fighting.

I am a fan of Frank Peretti’s books. If you have read Frank Peretti and enjoyed his books then think of this as Frank Peretti to the next level.

Aiko and her friends have spent some time fighting demons who are attacking individuals with drugs and self-deprecation, taking away the individual's willingness to live life. They have fought several battles like this but this new battle will take them beyond what they feel are their limits. Through prayer, their own and other warriors, God will supply them new strength to complete the battle of their life.

This book opened my eyes to how Satan has used depression and drug addictions to his advantage and for the destruction of mankind. If you are looking for a new awareness to the spiritual battle going on around us I recommend that you read this book. And don't forget to read your Bible while you're at it.

Mark Olmos, I’m looking forward to your next book.

278 pages, riveting reading.
ISBN-13: 978-1-933204-90-1

Obeying the Voice of God: Jack MacDonald’s Journey

The characters include:
Jack MacDonald and his family, as well as other persons he either had experience with or respected from history.

Just as a novel/a storybook, well written makes the characters come to life, so a book about the love of God, demonstrating His love through a contemporary’s life, when well written, brings God to life for the reader.

Jack MacDonald, with the help of his wife, Donnie MacDonald, walks us through his experience in the Vietnam War and the many miracles he experienced that saved his life. Jack’s walk with God is so close that it is in every conversation he has with every person. He wants you to know his Friend. The miracles don’t stop in Vietnam; they didn’t start there either. They have been a part of his life since he began his relationship with God.

Life was not easy for Jack, but his rest and his peace were in God. Jack demonstrates his relationship with God showing us how we are to get a close relationship with God ourselves

I do recommend this book. It is a book that I shared with my whole family. Shop for it at http://obeyingthevoice.com/.

After receiving it and reading it one person wrote, "Your book was an inspiration to me as God has been putting me through some serious testing. … I failed but God is faithful. He brought me through the valley of the shadow of death. He is good to me. Reading your book affirmed a few lessons the Lord has been teaching me lately and all my Christian life - that He is my provider. And through the words in your book, God reaffirmed His love for me and that He still has a plan for me and that is not to abandon me. I am thankful for the opportunity to read it."

Another person told me over the phone, "The day the book arrived our Bible Study group had just finished a study on Listening to God's voice. They were there when I opened the package and we saw the book Obeying the Voice of God. They were awe-struck. This is truly God making a point."

350 pages, easy reading.
ISBN-13: 978-0-9778545-1-6

I read the book first. Eventually, I sent it out as gifts to my family. My brother, Dean, actually beat me to writing a review of this book. He did such a fine job that I asked him if I could quote his review here. I didn’t. You can see his review at cominus.com and www.amazon.com

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The Teeth of the Tiger (Jack Ryan)

The characters include:
Jack Ryan, Jr., adult son of the former President Jack Ryan
Fraternal twins Dominic Caruso and Brian Caruso, who are also Jack Ryan, Jr.’s cousins

Dominic Caruso after studying to be an attorney works for the FBI as an agent. After a crisis happens he is contacted about taking a brand new position with an investment corporation. His twin brother is a Marine officer. He also is contacted by the investment corporation for a position after he proves himself in Afghanistan. The investment company is a cover for a new secret services organization, very secret because it is a private corporation instead of a government agency and the investments are how its secret ops are funded.

The agency was set up by the former President, Jack Ryan, who had been a former CIA agent. He assigns his best friend to run the agency, especially since his gift is making large sums of money from investments. The agency’s purpose is to disable enemies, terrorists, of the United States.

Jack Ryan, Jr. is hired as an ops analyst. The Caruso brothers are hired to be assassins. I felt that the hiring of Jack Ryan, Jr. was realistic considering the explanation for his exposure to secret agents while growing up, but how did he discover the existence of this secret agency? The answer to that was not plausible.

And I did not feel realism when the other 2 new recruits just happen to be 1) brothers, and 2) Jack Ryan Jr.’s cousins.

More unbelievable events:
The dialogue and nicknames the brothers used for each other (it was also annoying). Although the other characters might use additional references usually, an author will choose one pseudonym to refer to each character during his narrative and stick with that throughout, but Clancy bounced around with three pseudonyms for each character, which made following the characters (who is doing what) annoying.

Jack Jr. is talking to his cousins before their first mission and discusses the case and the target. It’s secret ops. Jack Jr. shouldn’t even know his cousins are involved, yet. Plus, none of them have been given permission to talk to the other (analyst vs. assassins) about the mission. Reported by A. Stephen Collins at Amazon.com, “I immediately assume that Jack will soon be in big trouble for his "loose lips." Nope. Clancy never deals with it at all, even though the twins tell their superior that Jack filled them in. (Oh, you told them about this super-classified info without authorization? No problem, kid.) What nonsense.”

I felt the brothers should “vacation” in each location before moving on to the next. It seems to me that as quickly as they were moving and the assassinations were taking place that the “bad guys” might soon notice a correlation. After all, the spy guys in the U.S. do (according to the story).

Rookie Ryan is assigned to be the Caruso brothers’ handler. No agency would have assigned a rookie to be anyone’s handler.


There were only two scenes that I would call action scenes, the rest of the book involved activity but not action, a lot of motion but no real tension.

Unless you’re following the life of Jack Ryan and his family I don’t recommend this book.

496 pages, heavy reading.
ISBN-10: 0-425-19740-9
ISBN-13: 978-0425197400

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The Three Mrs Parkers

by Joan Medlicott

The characters include:
the elderly Mrs. Parker, Winifred, the mother-in-law
the middle Mrs. Parker, Zoe, the daughter-in-law, and
the youngest Mrs. Parker, Kathryn, Zoe’s daughter who was married but reverted to her maiden name
in name only, Stephen Parker, son of Winifred, husband of Zoe.

The “why” of the story is two women who don’t know each other but are bonded together by a son/husband must now learn to get along. Each one blames the other for the son’s/husband’s death yet now they find they need each other.

This is a “… story about three generations of women who find their way past old hurts and losses to understanding, forgiveness and love … about family, friendship, and where the two meet” (Amazon editorial review). Getting past the old hurts and losses was way too easy for these three women. Maybe there are some that can get past them easily, but three within one circle of friendship or within one family just doesn’t happen in real life. Finding new friendships easily does happen.

For women, and possibly older teens, this is light reading. Forgiveness is its theme and as such, the hardcover copy I have has discussion questions about how the story handled the theme at the end of the book. I thought it interesting that the author had a couple in the story who seemed like true Christians, but the Parkers and the other people in the story were not, and the wedding takes place with a Unitarian pastor.

The crisis comes when all their lives are threatened. But after the crisis was over I felt it took too much time to wrap up and close the story. The author needed to get the three women re-coupled.

The author wrote this book according to the “rules”: have a crisis and have a reason for everything that happens. This caused the story to not always be flowing forward, but often stopping to answer the question, “why,” and doing a referral backward in time.

Unless you’re looking for a light read I don’t recommend this book.

290 pages, easy reading.
ISBN-10: 0739451103
ISBN-13: 978-0739451106

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